Jonathan Lamb

Arts

9 October, 18:54

Sophia revised the following sentence in her informative text, to be delivered to a group of hospital volunteers:

Before: Most children prefer nose spray over shots to prevent the flu.

After: Most children prefer nasal vaccines over injectable vaccines to prevent the flu.

What reason did Sophia have for making this revision?

A.

The words nose, spray, and shots did not fit her intended purpose.

B.

The words nose, spray, and shots were too formal for her intended audience.

C.

The words nose, spray, and shots set too serious a tone for her intended purpose.

D.

The words nose, spray, and shots were not specific enough for her intended audience.