What changes should be made to the above statement, located within a resume, to make it a more effective and powerful sounding qualification?

The question is incomplete as there is no above statement here. Here a general interpretation of the question shall be made. Normally human resource mangers have to go throughout thousands of resumes and it is not always possible for them to read line by line. This can negate chances of getting through for an employee. So they can make it a bit attractive by going some extra edge and using attractive lines that are some in style and structure. They should not bombard the resume with precious English words by just represent their academic and extra curricular sides in brief.