Read this selection from the opening of an application message, and then answer the corresponding question.

I recently heard about an entry-level position with your company. This would be a great opportunity for me to advance my career; consequently, I'm applying for the position. My skills and knowledge make me an ideal candidate.

If you were giving advice on how to revise this attention-getting paragraph, what advice would you give?

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Emily Hensley

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27 November, 07:36

Read this selection from the opening of an application message, and then answer the corresponding question.

I recently heard about an entry-level position with your company. This would be a great opportunity for me to advance my career; consequently, I'm applying for the position. My skills and knowledge make me an ideal candidate.

If you were giving advice on how to revise this attention-getting paragraph, what advice would you give?

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Spicy · Answer 1

Be more specific with your skill-set for the job.

Explanation:

Most of the people like to describe briefly their skills, but they do it with no details. I mean, to get attention from the owner of the company, or the manager, you need to say, since the beginning, why are you the right person for the job, because everybody says they are good for it.

In addition to it, you should explain your experience for the job and your achievements as a professional in the field.