It does not seem like one vote can make a difference. Every eligible person should vote.

Which revision offers the most improvement in sentence fluency?

Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.

It does not seem like one vote can make a difference, although every eligible person should vote.

It does not seem like one vote can make a difference because every eligible person should vote.

Since it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.

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Thomas Waller

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10 October, 15:23

It does not seem like one vote can make a difference. Every eligible person should vote.

Which revision offers the most improvement in sentence fluency?

Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.

It does not seem like one vote can make a difference, although every eligible person should vote.

It does not seem like one vote can make a difference because every eligible person should vote.

Since it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.

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Harmony Charles · Answer 1

The sentence which makes a revision that offers the most improvement in sentence fluency is:

Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.

This sentence uses the correct conjunctions and suggests correct presentation and interpretation of the ideas.