What is the single most important problem that should be addressed in this

paragraph during global revision?

It's really not that hard. I know several people who have built houses. Some of

them were simple houses, but one was really nice. It had a swimming pool.

Two were in really nice neighborhoods with great views. It took them a lot of

time and cost a lot of money; it was pretty hard work. I used to visit them all

the time. Anyway, that's the way it is.

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Linda Jarvis

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23 April, 11:33

What is the single most important problem that should be addressed in this

paragraph during global revision?

It's really not that hard. I know several people who have built houses. Some of

them were simple houses, but one was really nice. It had a swimming pool.

Two were in really nice neighborhoods with great views. It took them a lot of

time and cost a lot of money; it was pretty hard work. I used to visit them all

the time. Anyway, that's the way it is.

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Evan Spears · Answer 1

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It's really not that hard. I know several people who have built houses. Some of them were simple houses, but one was really nice. It had a swimming pool.

Two were in really nice neighborhoods with great views. It took them a lot of

time and cost a lot of money; it was pretty hard work. I used to visit them all

the time. Anyway, that's the way it is.