Which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly?

-Even though, my life is very busy, i spend as much time as i can with my family.

-I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.

-I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom.

-However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.

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Kingston Vega

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4 October, 17:46

Which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly?

-Even though, my life is very busy, i spend as much time as i can with my family.

-I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.

-I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom.

-However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.

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Azaria · Answer 1

-However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.

Explanation:

The above sentence satisfies the rules of punctuation.

It uses a comma after "However" to initiate a pause before resuming.

The correct use of the comma too differentiate and identify the cat and its name.