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17 January, 07:59

It is incumbent upon our sales representatives to make overtures of a positive nature to prospective clients prior to the finalization of their respective sales forecasts.

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  1. 17 January, 08:01
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    Revise the following sentence, replacing many of the Latinisms, unnecessary noun phrases, and jargon with plain language.

    It is incumbent upon our sales representatives to make overtures of a positive nature to prospective clients prior to the finalization of their respective sales forecasts.

    The main focus when converting a complex sentence into a simpler one should be to remove unnecessary words and replacing difficult or complicated words with simple plain language, then the other phrasers has to be taken care of. so, I have bold and underlined the Latinisms, unnecessary noun phrases, and jargon and also underlined out unnecessary phrasers. Now
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