How do you change this passage into a rambling sentence? '' I thought drive-in movies were a thing of the past, but we found one near our summer cottage, so naturally we asked Dad to take us, and he did, but none of us remembers what movie was playing, because first Monica made friends with the girls in the next car, and then Skip and I explored the grounds, especially between the car and the refreshment stand where we also made some new friends, and Dad spent his time cleaning out the trunk of the car, and we all accomplished a lot that night.'' you have ten minutes ... GO!

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22 September, 03:00

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Drake Woodward · Answer 1

Take away some of the and's, but's, so's. Add periods to some of the sentences.