Read the sentence. I had to prove my identity to gain entrance to the building I was required to fill out an impressive number of formsWhat is the best way to revise the sentence?

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Maren Graham

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17 July, 00:57

Read the sentence. I had to prove my identity to gain entrance to the building I was required to fill out an impressive number of formsWhat is the best way to revise the sentence?

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Valentino Gallagher · Answer 1

I had to prove my identity to gain entrance to the building; I was required to fill out an impressive number of forms.

Karissa Bates · Answer 2

The best way would be to reorder the clauses and provide correct conjunctions; I was required to fill out an impressive number of forms in order to prove my identity so that I could gain entrance to the building

This way the actions required are justified by the main purpose of doing such things.