Rattlesnakes live in the desert.

How should a writer add precise details to the sentence to make it most interesting to readers?

1. Rattlesnakes, a type of pit viper, live mostly in deserts across the southwestern United States and northern Mexico.

2. Rattlesnakes live in the desert in dens that they find in rocks or in tunnels dug by other animals.

3. Rattlesnakes live in the desert, and their bite is poisonous to humans and animals, but they rarely bite.

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Ashly Mahoney

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9 May, 18:41

Rattlesnakes live in the desert.

How should a writer add precise details to the sentence to make it most interesting to readers?

1. Rattlesnakes, a type of pit viper, live mostly in deserts across the southwestern United States and northern Mexico.

2. Rattlesnakes live in the desert in dens that they find in rocks or in tunnels dug by other animals.

3. Rattlesnakes live in the desert, and their bite is poisonous to humans and animals, but they rarely bite.

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Jordon Villa · Answer 1

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Explanation:

1) Seems to get the information that may inspire a reader to, well read, and capture the ideas from the original statement.

2 & 3) seem to have unnecessary / unrealted information (To the original statement)