Read the sentence. Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. Which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?

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Erica Mora

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9 October, 19:54

Read the sentence. Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. Which is the best way to revise this complex sentence?

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Javon · Answer 1

In 2011 Derek Jeter was thirty-seven years old and he notched his 3000th hit for the New York Yankees at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx,

Myla Flynn · Answer 2

correct answer is A:

In 2011, Derek Jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the New York Yankees at Yankee Stadium in the Bronx. He was thirty-seven years old.

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