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15 April, 03:38

Read these sentences from the passage:

The colour of eyes seems to be significant of temperament, but as regards beauty there is little or nothing to choose among colours. It is not the eye, but the eyelid, that is important, beautiful, eloquent, full of secrets.

When writing narrative essays, writers often revise the original sentences several times, for example, to remove unnecessary adjectives or adverbs in a modern essay. Which revision best captures the meaning of these two sentences?

The eyelid, in all its beauty and mystery, is of utmost importance.

The mysterie of the eyelid and the color of the eyes combine to beautify the eyes The color of the eyes is less important than the mystery of the eyelid.

The color of the eyes is more beautiful than the frame of the eyelid.

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  1. 15 April, 03:44
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    The color of the eyes is less important than the mystery of the eyelid. This revision omits the florid addition of adjectives and adverbs.
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