Directions: Take 2 minutes to work with a shoulder partner and determine if the following introductions are weak or strong. Be sure to explain WHY!

Workin part-time as a cashier at the Pily Wily has iven me a reat opportunity to observe human

behavior. Sometimes I think o the shoppers as white rats in a lab experiment, and the aisles as a maze

desined by a psycholoist. Most o the rats-customers, I mean-ollow a routine pattern, strollin up

and down the aisles, checkin throuh my chute, and then escapin throuh the exit hatch. But not

everyone is so dependable.

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Zachariah Herrera

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28 October, 16:28

Directions: Take 2 minutes to work with a shoulder partner and determine if the following introductions are weak or strong. Be sure to explain WHY!

Workin part-time as a cashier at the Pily Wily has iven me a reat opportunity to observe human

behavior. Sometimes I think o the shoppers as white rats in a lab experiment, and the aisles as a maze

desined by a psycholoist. Most o the rats-customers, I mean-ollow a routine pattern, strollin up

and down the aisles, checkin throuh my chute, and then escapin throuh the exit hatch. But not

everyone is so dependable.

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Jovanni Holt · Answer 1

These instructions are weak.

Explanation:

The given instructions do not have a sequence or set steps to follow. It does not even really explain what the narrator of the instructions is trying to do. It looks more like a paragraph from a novel than a list of instructions; its informal language and discussed behavior seem more like a person's inner thoughts.