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2 November, 15:21

So here's another question, do you think this poem is a good introduction?

I needed to write a poem introducing myself and I had to use the parts of speech and this is what I randomly came up with, what do you think? I'm not very good at poetry but I guess this sums it all up

Funny, quiet,

clinical but considerate

Kind heart, cold face

I need to chase

to see what lies beneath the,

cold face, heart's warm

like a fire place.

But outside she's a mystery,

so cold full of misery,

You may ask,

Is she Depressed,

Is she stressed,

What goes on in her brain

With such a face full of emptiness.

She's fine, You see

This is me

With a heart full of warmth

but a face full of misery.

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  1. 2 November, 15:25
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    I think you should keep it cuz this is a really really good poem from cat77
  2. 2 November, 15:40
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    Hi, to be honest that poem is great, you describe yourself very well and I think that you should keep it. It is a good introduction.
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