Choose the selection that provides the best example of sentence fluency

A. Today was the first day of fall. It was cool outside. It felt great. Everyone was happy to wear their new sweaters.

B. The temperature dropped on the first day of fall, bringing welcomed relief. Everyone was happy wearing their new sweaters.

C. On the beautiful first day of fall. The air was cool. It made everyone happy to wear their new sweaters.

D. Today was beautiful! It was fall. The air was cool. We all wore our new sweaters.

The correct answer is B. The temperature dropped on the first day of fall, bringing welcomed relief. Everyone was happy wearing their new sweaters.

Explanation:

In language, sentence fluency refers to the way words flow together, this implies ideas and words have a natural rhythm and imitate oral language. In these terms, each idea is expressed using a sentence, rather than including multiple choppy or short sentences. Besides this, fluency implies using punctuation marks when necessary as wells as transitions.

According to this, the best example of sentence fluency is "The temperature dropped on the first day of fall, bringing welcomed relief. Everyone was happy wearing their new sweaters" because this sentence avoids dividing ideas into multiple choppy sentences, and instead integrates the information in two main sentences using punctuation marks only when necessary.

I think B shows the best sentence fluency because all the others are really choppy sentences. Ther is constantly an abrupt stop in the other sentences.