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Music is awesome. It makes me feel alive and happy and everything good. Heres some the way the music affects me. I always have been around music. For as long as I could remember I have been in love with Jazz and Pop.

Later on, I would adapt more to Jazz music. My first ever favorite jazz artist was Lena Horne. I could listen to her till the sun set. She would lift me and get me in better moods. I could always depend on her music if nobody else.

I could recite her songs word from word as if I wrote for her. If she came on in the car I would basically jump out the sunroof because of my energy. All in all, music is a fantastic thing. It makes me feel alive and happy and everything good. I don't know what I would do without music!

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17 April, 10:55

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Kaylynn Marquez · Answer 1

There's one thing you need to add. It's how long you have been in love with pop music. Besides that I think it is awesome!