Nelson Douglas

English

8 August, 11:13

Cooking really is so much fun, and it makes me happy.

Food is a part of so many events, both happy and sad

and it brings families together. Learning how to cook

really changed my life.

What is the best way for the writer to expand on this

part of the personal statement?

The writer should expand on why food is a part of

so many events.

The writer should talk about the types of food he or

she likes to cook.

The writer should expand on how learning to cook

has changed his or her life.

The writer should show how cooking has changed

so many other people's lives as well.