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3 January, 20:24

How can I make this sentence sound more smooth? This is a practice essay I am doing.

"My head was full of shiny flowing hair and just after five minutes it was gone."

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  1. 3 January, 20:36
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    "my head had grown a full head of shiny flowing hair and just after five minutes it was all gone ..."
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