Read the sentence.

Jada likes going to the pool in the summer.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

On sizzling summer days, Jada enjoys soaking in the refreshing pool water.

Jada looks forward to swimming in the local pool at summertime.

During the hot summer, Jada really loves going to her neighborhood pool.

Jada likes to swim and anticipates visiting her community pool every summer.

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Aydin

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1 November, 06:53

Read the sentence.

Jada likes going to the pool in the summer.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

On sizzling summer days, Jada enjoys soaking in the refreshing pool water.

Jada looks forward to swimming in the local pool at summertime.

During the hot summer, Jada really loves going to her neighborhood pool.

Jada likes to swim and anticipates visiting her community pool every summer.

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Wesley Burgess · Answer 1

I think it should be "On Sizzling summer days, Jada enjoys soaking in the refreshing pool water". I chose this as my answer because the word sizzling can give a reader a connection on how hot it was, and how Jada was going to the pool which was refreshing to her.