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21 May, 08:24

How do I make these sentences more appealing and interesting?

The first day back to school after the tragic event that happened, my parents and I met with my middle school administrator and received a pass for me to wear a hat to school. I also had to talk to my gym teacher about wearing long sleeves and long pants due to health reasons.

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  1. 21 May, 08:32
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    Explanation:

    What the gym teacher thought of you could be interesting when you add it to that paragraph
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