Rewrite the following paragraph by adding dialogue and enhancing the voice by adding personality to the characters.

The road was long. We were tired. I asked my dad when we would stop and he said he didn't know. I hoped it would be soon. The car was tiny and cramped with camping gear we would be using when we got to the campground.

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11 September, 15:21

Rewrite the following paragraph by adding dialogue and enhancing the voice by adding personality to the characters.

The road was long. We were tired. I asked my dad when we would stop and he said he didn't know. I hoped it would be soon. The car was tiny and cramped with camping gear we would be using when we got to the campground.

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Kymani Harrington · Answer 1

The road was long and we were tired. "Dad when can we stop? I'm exhausted!" I asked my father. "I don't know." he mumbled. I hoped it would be soon. The car was tiny and cramped with camping gear we would be using when we got to the campground.

Explanation: This paragraph adds dialogue between the characters and personality.