It was a hot dry day last august when I realized that I was tired of Summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that Summer days were too warm, too long and too sunny. I decided to get in my car and drive North to the mountains for some cool air which I love and shady trees. It was the best decision I made all Summer.

Write three to five sentences explaining what should be done to edit this paragraph for errors.

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Avery Esparza

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6 October, 06:28

It was a hot dry day last august when I realized that I was tired of Summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that Summer days were too warm, too long and too sunny. I decided to get in my car and drive North to the mountains for some cool air which I love and shady trees. It was the best decision I made all Summer.

Write three to five sentences explaining what should be done to edit this paragraph for errors.

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Hana Keith · Answer 1

In the first sentence, put a comma after hot and lowercase the s in summer. In the second, put a comma after day and lowercase the s in summer. In the third, lowercase the n in north. Put a comma after air and after love in the third one as well. Then in the last, lowercase the s in summer. You're welcome.