Read the letter of complaint below and answer the question that follows. Jane Doe 1000 West Pearl Avenue Lacy, OH 43210 November 1, 2010 Manager, Kool Games Inc. 3101 East Swan Blvd. Palmdale, CA 93518 To whom it may concern: I purchased a Kool Action game system from BullsEye on October 27, 2010, for $109.99. It seemed like a great price until I got it home and began trying to assemble it. Several parts are missing, and the store refuses to exchange the unit because it was on sale. It was not marked "As is," so I expected a complete and functioning unit. What should the writer of this letter do before sending her letter? correct errors in conventions find a specific person to address in the letter use a less formal tone and vocabulary use a more formal tone and vocabulary

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27 March, 02:50

Read the letter of complaint below and answer the question that follows. Jane Doe 1000 West Pearl Avenue Lacy, OH 43210 November 1, 2010 Manager, Kool Games Inc. 3101 East Swan Blvd. Palmdale, CA 93518 To whom it may concern: I purchased a Kool Action game system from BullsEye on October 27, 2010, for $109.99. It seemed like a great price until I got it home and began trying to assemble it. Several parts are missing, and the store refuses to exchange the unit because it was on sale. It was not marked "As is," so I expected a complete and functioning unit. What should the writer of this letter do before sending her letter? correct errors in conventions find a specific person to address in the letter use a less formal tone and vocabulary use a more formal tone and vocabulary

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correct errors in conventions

find a specific person to address in the letter

use a less formal tone and vocabulary

use a more formal tone and vocabulary

Because the recipient of this letter is unknown, option B would not be appropriate for this letter. The speech in the letter is adequately formal, so options C and D are not necessary. That leaves us with option A. Taking into consideration that the conventions are: spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, organization, and voice/style, it's always important to check these before submitting any written speech (revising stage of the writing process).