The novel Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen is a classic because its message is enduring. The novel is similar to her other works. The novel examines the pitfalls of preconceived. The novel has had a number of adaptations, theatrical renditions, and sequels, but the theme is always the same.

How should this paragraph be revised?

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Alyson Blackburn

English

11 October, 18:54

The novel Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen is a classic because its message is enduring. The novel is similar to her other works. The novel examines the pitfalls of preconceived. The novel has had a number of adaptations, theatrical renditions, and sequels, but the theme is always the same.

How should this paragraph be revised?

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Roberto Garrison · Answer 1

The paragraph stated above should be written this way:

The "Pride and Prejudice" by Jane Austen, is a classic novel because its message is enduring. It is similar to her other works. It examines the pitfalls of preconceived and has had a number of adaptations, theatrical renditions, and sequels, but the theme is always the same.

How is it revised?

Simply replace the noun (the novel), with the pronoun "it". It is not really necessary to keep mentioning "the novel" when there is a pronoun that can be used to actually replace it. Also, since there are ideas that are written in short sentences, I used the conjunction "and" to make the 2 sentences one.