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22 December, 04:52

Read the sentence.

I love the thrill of jumping out of an airplane, pulling the parachute's rip cord, and a smooth landing.

Which revision corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?

I love the thrill of an airplane jump, pulling the parachute's rip cord, and a smooth landing.

I love the thrill of jumping out an airplane, the pull of the parachute's rip cord, and landing smoothly.

I love the thrill of jumping out of an airplane, pulling the parachute's rip cord, and landing smoothly.

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  1. 22 December, 04:56
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    love the thrill of jumping out of an airplane, pulling the parachute’s rip cord, and landing smoothly.
  2. 22 December, 05:00
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    Sentence 3 would be correct, I believe.
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