Edit the journal. Fix five mistakes in pronouns. March 28 Today my track teammates won an award at camp. Nina usesa prosthetic, or artificial, leg. She is on the track team with they. My teammates are grateful to she because it runs fast. The medals are a victory for Nina and they. Them are all very proud.

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Roderick Conway

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15 February, 10:40

Edit the journal. Fix five mistakes in pronouns. March 28 Today my track teammates won an award at camp. Nina usesa prosthetic, or artificial, leg. She is on the track team with they. My teammates are grateful to she because it runs fast. The medals are a victory for Nina and they. Them are all very proud.

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Klein · Answer 1

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March 28 Today my track teammates won an award at camp. Nina used a prosthetic, or artificial leg. She was on the track team with them. My teammates were grateful to her because she ran fast. The medals were a victory for Nina and them. They were all very proud.

It was necessary to write everything in past tense since the actions were completed at a specific time in the past. Also, it was necessary to change subject and object pronouns as well as eliminating one comma after the word artificial.