Number the sentences in order to create a strong body paragraph. Use the number 1 to indicate the first sentence of

the paragraph.

He is embarrassed because the things he says sound silly instead of impressive.

"Broken Chain" by Gary Soto shows how a person acts differently to be accepted.

This scene shows that he isn't himself when he's trying to impress someone.

When Alfonso meets Sandra, he tries to make conversation that is cool.

He is embarrassed because the things he says sound silly instead of impressive: 3

"Broken Chain" by Gary Soto shows how a person acts differently to be accepted.: 1

This scene shows that he isn't himself when he's trying to impress someone.:4

When Alfonso meets Sandra, he tries to make conversation that is cool. : 2

Answer: 1."Broken Chain" by Gary Soto shows how a person acts differently to be accepted. When Alfonso meets Sandra, he tries to make conversation that is cool. He is embarrassed because the things he says sound silly instead of impressive. This scene shows that he isn't himself when he's trying to impress someone.

Explanation:

A strong paragraph always starts with a description o what you will be discussing. It is almost like an introduction sentence for the paragraph. Then play around with sentences, what sounds like it fits? Would this make sense to my audience? If you get it from there, you will be writing strong essays in no time.