What is the BEST way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence? She will come back for another visit. She told Michael this news. A) She told Michael some very important news. B) She will come back soon for another visit. C) Michael was told some great news by his best friend. D) She told Michael that she would come back for another visit.

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Phoenix Kim

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7 August, 17:52

What is the BEST way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence? She will come back for another visit. She told Michael this news. A) She told Michael some very important news. B) She will come back soon for another visit. C) Michael was told some great news by his best friend. D) She told Michael that she would come back for another visit.

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Isabela · Answer 1

The correct answer is D. This sentence conveys a clear message in a concise way and it is easy to understand the meaning and language used. Furthermore, this sentence doesn't change the meaning of the original sentence. By using reported speech you give a more clear and condense idea and keep the same idea as the original sentence.

Zane Chan · Answer 2

D) She told Michael that she would come back for another visit.

Explanation:

She told Michael that she would come back for another visit. This contains the same ideas, but is not one long string of thoughts.