Which statement should be revised for a more formal tone? Artemis wasn't great to have around because she's the one who brought death and disease everywhere. Artemis and Apollo, her twin brother, were armed with bows, quivers, and arrows in battle. Artemis never fell in love and remained unmarried, remaining a symbol of purity and holiness. Artemis was considered the goddess of wild animals, hunting, and the natural world.

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Adam Moreno

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11 September, 04:03

Which statement should be revised for a more formal tone? Artemis wasn't great to have around because she's the one who brought death and disease everywhere. Artemis and Apollo, her twin brother, were armed with bows, quivers, and arrows in battle. Artemis never fell in love and remained unmarried, remaining a symbol of purity and holiness. Artemis was considered the goddess of wild animals, hunting, and the natural world.

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Jadyn Gill · Answer 1

I believe the first sentence needs to be revised.

Julissa Greer · Answer 2

A. Artemis wasn’t great to have around because she’s the one who brought death and disease everywhere.

Question A should be revised because it contains contractions.