Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion?

Read the paragraph.

1. In conclusion, of all the possible careers in film, the

producer's job is the one that's really cool. 2. Among its

many prerequisites, the job of the producer requires

creativity, leadership, and communication skills, along with

superior organizational skills. 3. It'll keep you on your toes,

that's for sure

The details and mechanics are good, but sentences 2

and 3 should be reorganized to include logical

transitions.

The word choice and style are good, but there are

punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and

The mechanics and organization are good, but

sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal

style and objective tone.

The tone and style are good, but errors in grammar,

spelling, and punctuation in sentences 1, 2, and 3 should

be fixed.

Question

Athena Kelley

English

13 August, 17:22

Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion?

Read the paragraph.

1. In conclusion, of all the possible careers in film, the

producer's job is the one that's really cool. 2. Among its

many prerequisites, the job of the producer requires

creativity, leadership, and communication skills, along with

superior organizational skills. 3. It'll keep you on your toes,

that's for sure

The details and mechanics are good, but sentences 2

and 3 should be reorganized to include logical

transitions.

The word choice and style are good, but there are

punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and

The mechanics and organization are good, but

sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal

style and objective tone.

The tone and style are good, but errors in grammar,

spelling, and punctuation in sentences 1, 2, and 3 should

be fixed.

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Answers (2)

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Ramon · Answer 1

The best peer evaluation of the conclusion is "The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal"

Explanation:

The vocabulary that is being used on sentences 1 and 3 gives the conclusion an informal tone, which is quite contrary to the kind of writing in sentence 2, to have a coherent and cohesive writing it would be recommendable to edit the two lines to have a more formal version and avoid the use of popular expressions such as "that's really cool" or "keep you on your toes".

Alonso · Answer 2

The word choice and style are good, but there are

punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and

The mechanics and organization are good, but

sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal

style and objective tone.