Read the sentence. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. Which is the best revision of the sentence? Tension will erupt in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. Tension erupted in the room when it reveals that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain will know that the spy withholding information. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withheld information.

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Rosa Craig

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5 May, 03:34

Read the sentence. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. Which is the best revision of the sentence? Tension will erupt in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. Tension erupted in the room when it reveals that the villain knew that the spy withholding information. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain will know that the spy withholding information. Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withheld information.

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Hillary Hobbs · Answer 1

Hillary Hobbs 5 May, 03:37

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In smaller words the answer is A

Cordell Yoder · Answer 2

The best revision of the incorrect example is the last option - Tension erupted in the room when it was revealed that the villain knew that the spy withheld information.

Due to the sequence of tenses, all verbs need to be written in the past tense.