Which sentence should be revised to have a formal style and objective language? The colorful autumn foliage in New England attracts tourists each year. The long winters in New England sometimes feel like they last forever. Once the spring thaw begins, a variety of flowers bloom in New England. In contrast to winter, summer in New England can be both hot and humid. seems to be the problem? ...

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Duncan Washington

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6 July, 00:53

Which sentence should be revised to have a formal style and objective language? The colorful autumn foliage in New England attracts tourists each year. The long winters in New England sometimes feel like they last forever. Once the spring thaw begins, a variety of flowers bloom in New England. In contrast to winter, summer in New England can be both hot and humid. seems to be the problem? ...

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Laura Whitney · Answer 1

I would say that The long winters in New England sometimes feel like they last forever. First of all, it is not objective, it is very subjective - to some it may seem like it lasts forever, but to people who like winter it may seem short. Also, there isn't any formal language like in the other sentences: foliage, thaw, variety, bloom, in contrast, humid, etc.