Read the sentence. When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour. Which correction would make this sentence more clear?

a) changing "her sister" to "the girl"

b) changing "she" to "Breanna"

c) changing "Breanna" to "she"

d) changing "flour" to "it"

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Jaelyn Terry

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21 November, 09:53

Read the sentence. When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour. Which correction would make this sentence more clear?

a) changing "her sister" to "the girl"

b) changing "she" to "Breanna"

c) changing "Breanna" to "she"

d) changing "flour" to "it"

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Jessica Espinoza · Answer 1

B. because if you put "D" then they wont know what "it" is and if you put "C" They wouldnt know who "she" is and a if you change a to "the girl" they won't know who the girl is but if you put d changing she to Breanna they know she is Breanna

Read the sentence. When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour. Which correction would make this sentence more clear?a) changing "her sister" to "the girl"b) changing "she" to "Breanna"c) changing "Breanna" to "she"d) changing "flour" to "it"

Read the sentence. When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour. Which correction would make this sentence more clear?

a) changing "her sister" to "the girl"

b) changing "she" to "Breanna"

c) changing "Breanna" to "she"

d) changing "flour" to "it"