During our summer vacations, we would always go out to our cabin by Butterfly Creek. The trips were always fun and relaxing. We would take hikes, photograph the wildlife, and swim in the river. Wildflowers in high meadows. Butterflies hovering. I still remember the smell of pine canyons when I think about those years. What is the biggest problem with this paragraph? There are several spelling mistakes. There are repeated words. There are fragments. There are not enough details.

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16 August, 09:49

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Bria Sweeney · Answer 1

If you read it out loud, or to yourself, you should hear some repetition in the writing.