Which is the best revision of this sentence? Jessica slept until mid-afternoon after studying all night. A. Studying all night, Jessica then slept until mid-afternoon. B. Studying all night, and then she slept until mid-afternoon. C. Slept until mid-afternoon after studying all night. D. The sentence is fine as is.

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Brian Richmond

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23 January, 12:18

Which is the best revision of this sentence? Jessica slept until mid-afternoon after studying all night. A. Studying all night, Jessica then slept until mid-afternoon. B. Studying all night, and then she slept until mid-afternoon. C. Slept until mid-afternoon after studying all night. D. The sentence is fine as is.

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Alonso Barnett · Answer 1

D. The rest of the options are not that suitable. However, it would have been better if there were an option " After studying all night, Jessica slept until mid-afternoon."