Read the opening sentence from a draft of a document-based essay on government authority in Nazi Germany.

Draft: In Nazi Germany, the government censored the press.

Which example is the best revision of this sentence?

1. In Nazi Germany, the government censored the press by preventing newspapers from publishing articles that opposed Nazi ideology.

2. Censorship of the press in Nazi Germany was a big problem for many newspapers and magazines.

3. In Nazi Germany, censorship of the press was pretty bad, but it could have been a whole lot worse.

4. Censorship of the press was not only a problem in Nazi Germany, it also occurred in the fascist state of Italy.

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24 March, 18:21

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Clayton · Answer 1

The bazillion government central government government approved officials

Linnea · Answer 2

In my opinion the first one sounds the best because it gives background information and interludes into possible body paragraphs.