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14 January, 22:47

Read the paragraph that Tamar wrote. In conclusion, the Industrial Revolution resulted in great growth for the United States. It is true that the Industrial Revolution had some drawbacks and disadvantages. But the advances in industry, communication, and transportation far outweigh any problems. People should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it. Which sentence most needs revision? In conclusion, the Industrial Revolution resulted in great growth for the United States. It is true that the Industrial Revolution had some drawbacks and disadvantages. But the advances in industry, communication, and transportation far outweigh any problems. People should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it.

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  1. 14 January, 22:53
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    The correct answer is the following.

    The sentence that needs most revision is "People should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it."

    It needs revision because the sentence can use better words to compose a better sentence with more academic language that strengthens the conclusion of the essay. There are better terms to identify that idea that wants to be conveyed that would give the conclusion a more formal way to present the concept.
  2. 14 January, 22:53
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    Yes, it is true that the Industrial Revolution had some setbacks and disadvantages. But the advances in industry, communication and transportation far outweigh any problems.

    Explanation:

    People should stop focusing on the bad stuffs and notice all the good sides to it.
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