Which version of the sentence below most clearly describes a joyful moment of hard-earned success? i clutched the certificate tightly in my nervous and sweaty hands, hoping i wouldn't trip on the red carpet. the certificate felt stiff and real in my trembling hand as i walked back down the aisle to the applause of friends. the certificate was heavy in my hands and drew many tears from me and my family. the certificate, with its glowing gold and crimson seal, felt like a blazing sword lighting the path before me?

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Jaliyah Norman

Social Studies

13 April, 11:50

Which version of the sentence below most clearly describes a joyful moment of hard-earned success? i clutched the certificate tightly in my nervous and sweaty hands, hoping i wouldn't trip on the red carpet. the certificate felt stiff and real in my trembling hand as i walked back down the aisle to the applause of friends. the certificate was heavy in my hands and drew many tears from me and my family. the certificate, with its glowing gold and crimson seal, felt like a blazing sword lighting the path before me?

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Jovanni Holt · Answer 1

Answer: "the certificate, with its glowing gold and crimson seal, felt like a blazing sword lighting the path before me."

Out of all the sentences, this is the one that has both elements of joy and of accomplishment. It also contains a promise for the future.

The first sentence conveys some nervousness and anxiety, not joy. The second one, though it has some joy on the side of the family, still conveys nervousness. The third one shows joy fully. However, it does not portray the certificate in a good light. It feels "heavy." It does not imply happiness or hope for the future.

Leanna Kim · Answer 2

The certificate, with its glowing gold and crimson seal, felt like a blazing sword lighting the path before me.