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8 May, 21:16

A student has written the following thesis statement for her college application essay:

"In my senior year of high school, I demonstrated my leadership abilities by participating in a charity fundraiser in my local community."

When considering the audience and purpose of the essay, this thesis statement is

A. too broad for the purpose.

B. too specific for the purpose.

C. strongly written and appropriate.

D. inappropriate for the audience.

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  1. 8 May, 21:45
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    B - too specific for the purpose

    While that would be a good topic sentence, it is far too specific for the thesis of an entire essay
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