Harper Ellis

English

4 September, 19:25

Hi Shelby,

We are in beautiful Venice! We saw the whole city. We rode in gondolas to see the sites. We saw incredible architecture and artwork. They say the buildings are in danger. The Adriatic Sea is rising. Venice is slowly sinking. I hope they can save it.

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