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5 December, 02:38

I need and opinion. Does this sound okay?

It's called the All so Loving

The all so loving

is like a garden

with joy

for all to share,

With tender, growing blossoms

that thrive on love

and care,

And when

the flowers are gathered

for a very special day,

They make

a bright and beautiful

happiness bouquet

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  1. 5 December, 02:39
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    The poem has a very pleasant rhythm you can read it over and over again and you don't get tired of reading it, you used exquisite words that transformed the poem into something beautiful, you gave a sweet and soft tune. In my opinion the poem is perfect.
  2. 5 December, 02:55
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    Wow. That's actually really good. The pattern and rhyme scheme fit well and the flow is very smooth.
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